HOL 15 -- The Consequences of Carelessness

The Hope of Light, Book One: The Blade
Episode Fifteen -- The Consequences of Carelessness

and thus ends Book One.  One of Five, I believe.  One and Three from Elise's perspective, Two and Four from Inculta's, Five to end it.  I'd be interested in hearing your thoughts on Book One, honestly.  I've put a metric ton of work into this, and DA's been kind of a wash thus far, feeback-wise, even if other venues have made it worthwhile to continue to host it all here, at least for linking purposes.   So if you've been lurking, I'd not mind hearing from you.  

Cheers
jonas